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Question by BeautyWithTheBeat: how do you like the first chapter of my book. its a chick lit. boys can answer too.?
So here is the 1st chappy. hope u like it.

“You’re sending me too a boarding school?” Alayna’s perfectly glossed mouth hung open in the shape of an O. “What have I ever done to deserve this?” Alayna put her hand to her heart. Her mom rolled her eyes and sighed. “Alayna, quit being over dramatic. And are you seriously asking what you have done to deserve this?” “You kissed a boy. In the middle of class. In front of everyone. And no to mention the fact you were only in the sixth grade.” Alayna glared at her mom.
“I had to kiss him. He was the most popular guy in school. My status would have been affected if I had’nt.” Now it was her mom’s time to put her hand to her heart. “Your status?” “Alayna, are you serious? What do you know about status?” “I know that if I had’nt kissed him I would be sitting with the losers at table nine,” she muttered.
Her mom shot a desperate look at her father across the room. He acted like he was interested in the bluebird that was now sitting on the window sill of thier over sized living room. “If it helps, the school is coed,” her mother’s voice was becoming desperate. “I don’t care if it’s bi!” Alayna shouted.
Her father finally butted in. “Watch your mouth young lady. And we have a surprise for you. Jade’s going with you.” Alayna rolled her eyes. “So her parents are forcing her to go, too?” she asked. “No, she, unlike some people, doesn’t mind going,” her father answered. “So she wants to go, and your’e forcing me?” “No one’s being forced, Alayna,” her mom said. Alayna smirked. “Then if that’s the case, I’m not going.” “Oh, your’e going, even if we have to tie you up and gag you,” her father said. Her hand took its place on her heart once more. She gasped. “You’d do that?” she asked. “If we had too,” her father answered.
Alayna tried one more desperate attempt. “Haven’t I already been punished for this? You took away my credit card.” “We took away one of your credit cards. And who said this was a punishment?” “Well, if it’s not, then what is it?” she asked. “Look at it as rehab,” her mother advised. “I don’t do drugs,” she huffed under her breath. “You know what? This discussion is O-V-E-R over. Your’e going to boarding school in one week, no ifs, ands, buts about it, and your’e going to be pleasant about it.” And he walked right out the room. Her mom looked at her. “Well, here’s your credit card. Give Kingston-James a try before you say you don’t like it.” She gave her a small hug and followed her husband out the room.
Alayna pulled out her rhinestone studded iPhone and sent a text to Jade.
glamur_godess:i hate my life 🙁
gossip_fashionita:ur such a pessemist
glamur_goddess:ur such an optimist. did u kno the darn thing is called kingston-james?
gossip_fashionita:its not a darn thing.its a boarding school. and yes i kno what its called
glamur_goddess:whatev. i got my credit card back today
gossip_fashionita: *insert laugh here* u could have done that without that credit card.
glamur_goddes:1ce again, whatev. u comin or not?
gossip_fashionita: see u in an hour.
Alayna sat her phone down and sighed. Oh, well. At least it was coed.

so? do u like it?love it? hate it? tell me whatcha think please.
thanks
oh the part when she told jade she got her card back. i forgot a part. it was upposed to say: i got my credit card back. im goin shoppin
there are two more main characters thet will be introduced later.

Best answer:

Answer by mostwanted417
awesome story.
just change the first two paragraph of the mom’s dialogue, cuz she sounds a bit like a teenager.
lol
good job.

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